tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1817405930079039333.post4418408435433463031..comments2023-05-18T02:27:24.757-07:00Comments on Purdie Writing: Variety & Sound in WritingKathryn Purdiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18337488365098780737noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1817405930079039333.post-50414957820641060372012-04-12T08:39:47.285-07:002012-04-12T08:39:47.285-07:00Welcome to my blog, Fiona! I think all writers are...Welcome to my blog, Fiona! I think all writers are guilty of these things. I could pick to death the sound and variety in my writing. At some point I have to blow it a kiss, wish it good luck, and say goodbye. :-)Kathryn Purdiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18337488365098780737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1817405930079039333.post-89076381727021326242012-04-12T03:10:33.863-07:002012-04-12T03:10:33.863-07:00This is great advice! I'm definitely guilty of...This is great advice! I'm definitely guilty of needing to mix up my sentences. I'm especially aware of it now though, so I like to think I avoid it a lot more than I used to. I'll most certainly take on board some of this advice when I next come to edit. Sometimes it's so easy to forget how crucial sound and variety can be in writing, so thank you for the reminder.Fhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10009535630790690487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1817405930079039333.post-50539982569076542202012-04-04T08:21:42.309-07:002012-04-04T08:21:42.309-07:00Brilliant as always. I've been guilty of each ...Brilliant as always. I've been guilty of each one of these. What helps me see them most is to read my story outloud. Or even better, have my kindle do it for me in that machanical voice.Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09462486350293703991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1817405930079039333.post-59840711603071852922012-04-02T16:07:57.147-07:002012-04-02T16:07:57.147-07:00Great post! I remember learning this about my writ...Great post! I remember learning this about my writing. It really opened my eyes. :)Michelle D. Argylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696465137285587646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1817405930079039333.post-78415949787388904202012-04-01T15:23:22.995-07:002012-04-01T15:23:22.995-07:00These are all great reminders. You should seriousl...These are all great reminders. You should seriously write a book. Haha. I mean like a writing craft book. I like your explanations and examples. So helpful!ilimahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17899071063752311737noreply@blogger.com